The Poem

ANGRY SILENCE

ERIX INTERNATIONAL - Internet Poem of the Month winner March 1998

There’s a cold wind that’s blowing

Through cardboard city tonight

Huddled bodies in street doorways

Hide from flickering lights

The rain pours down on moving homes

Each one is filled with violence

No one wants to know their plight

There’s just an angry silence

 

Bright lights have lost their attraction

In a child’s life just begun

A run-away from his mother

No longer called her son

Cigarettes and cups of coffee

Standing on red-light streets

A sad and lonely figure

The office types he greets

 

Little packets bought in shadows

Will release him from his hell

The world will see his other face

What stories he can tell

Saturday night, the money’s good

The city centre lives

It breathes and breeds the poison

That’s left his life in shreds

 

In the early hours of morning

While body hides from storm

He thinks of all the wasted years

Of home and love and warmth

Through tears and sorrow, all alone

To live now makes no sense

In darkest hour there’s nothing

Just an angry silence

 

A sad dark side to London Town I saw every week, that hides behind all that glitters. Meths drinkers, addicts, and young prostitutes living a miserable existence yards from an indifferent public.

 

 

Copyright Raymond B. Stone 1998©

 

 

 

Comments

This poem captures the underbelly of most cities. It is incredibly sad and it reinforces Thoreau's contention that most people lead lives of quiet desperation. This situation also leaves those who look on feeling helpless. There is so littel we can do to change it.

The imagery was very powerful.

What a powerful poem.  The imagery is so alive/dead (excuse the pun).  Every community has an underbelly and this exposes a street life that most citizens have no idea exists. Well crafted and well dsecribed.