Submitted by Ray Stone on Wednesday 13 February 2013
I have always wanted to write Sci-Fi or Horror but never took the plunge. As I am in a state of flux at the moment I decided now was the time to give it a go. I am coming to the end of editing my current novel which will hopefully be published by the end of this year. A decision has to be made. Do I write another novel in the same genre, which is what I plan to do, or shall I test the water and see what happens. So here I ask any reader of my work below to please let me know what you think. This is the opening scene from a proposed short story. Please don't pat me on the head - I need good honest criticism. Thank you.